"Our mission here at We Mean Business is to be the best at the production of our client’s business documents. We believe that with the combination of communication and hard work, we can meet the complete satisfaction of our customer’s company needs."
You have a nice cartoon, and good title. However, it doesn't really tell the reader what exactly a writing consultant does.
ReplyDeleteLydia makes a good point. Plus, you have a lot of mistakes in your mechanics.
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